Interview with Amy DeFlavis, Runner Up in the WOW! Q4 2024 Creative Nonfiction Contest

Sunday, December 22, 2024

 


Amy DeFlavis resides and writes in Bucks County, Pennsylvania. Her short stories, flash fiction, and creative nonfiction essays have earned placements in Writers Digest, NYC Midnight, and WOW Women on Writing competitions.Outside her corporate day job, she spends her time editing her debut romantic suspense novel and refining her author website. Her moments of respite are found in renovating her historic home, planning adventures to various corners of the world, and manifesting the life of her dreams. 











----------Interview by Renee Roberson

WOW: I loved reading your essay, "Neglected Gardens and Other Untended Things," about the discovery of a mother fox and her brood living in your backyard. There are so many elements woven throughout, from your relationship with your beloved dog, to the still and quiet of the moment, to the realization that you and the fox could be one and the same. What was the process of writing and revising this piece like for you? 

Amy: From the moment I saw the mother fox standing on top of my shed, I knew I'd write a story about her. My biggest challenge was keeping within the word count because I had so much to say. But I had a connection with her that felt more than coincidental, and she proceeded to tell me her story without much fanfare or frivolity. I have a tendency to be wordy, but she got straight to the point, which helped me keep the revisions to a minimum. I've lived in my home for a little over twenty years and this past spring was the first time the foxes showed up. Their arrival took me by complete surprise, and I looked forward to watching their antics every day. When I started posting videos of them on Facebook, my friends and neighbors were as excited as I was, and they would stop by for watch parties. It became a fun pastime that brought so many people together for a brief and magical moment in time. I knew there was a reason for it and that I needed to write about it. 

WOW: What is your favorite line from this essay and why? 

Amy: I think my favorite line is about my relationship with my dog. "It's like our own Grey Gardens, and we're the human/canine versions of Big and Little Edie--eccentric, annoying, and set in our ways." My dog is almost 19 years old. I got her only a few years after I moved into my home. In a lot of ways, we've grown up together. We've seen and put up with each other at our worst and our best, and like the Edie's, we find it difficult to function without each other. I often tell her it's okay if she wants to "go to the light," and I find myself saying it more and more recently. I think it's time. She doesn't agree. So we continue our dance. 

WOW: Your bio mentions you are working on a romantic suspense novel. What do you enjoy about writing in that genre? 

Amy: I've always loved romance. Like a lot of Gen X girls, I grew up reading Kathleen E. Woodiwiss, Johanna Lindsey, Julie Garwood, and Jude Deveraux. I liked the fantasy of perfect love, but I also had a fascination with horror, mystery, and suspense novels. To me, romantic suspense is the best of both worlds-- combine the love story of two people who are fighting against the odds, the killer, or the outside forces, and I'm hooked. I have no idea if I've pulled it off successfully, but I guess I'll find out once my Beta readers get back to me. 

WOW: Having experienced success in numerous writing contests, what do you think is the key to crafting a competitive essay or short story? 

Amy: I've been genuinely surprised at the success I have been having lately with short stories and essays. I can only speak for myself, but the key for me is to show the emotions of my characters and express them in a way that people feel they can connect with. It seems to be resonating with others because I get a lot of feedback from people who tell me they felt like they were actually in the story as they were reading it. I think that's the highest compliment I could ever get because I want people to feel things when they read my words, and I've worked so hard on showing vs telling. 

WOW: Do you have any fun or interesting stories about renovating your historic home? We’d love to hear them! 

Amy: Oh, gosh, I don't know about fun or interesting. As a single woman trying to do it all on my own, it's been more like nightmares! Ha ha! But I'm so happy I landed where I did all those years ago and took a chance. My father was a contractor, and while he paid for two weddings for my sisters, I told him it might be a better investment of his time and money if he helped me fix up an old house instead. He took me up on it. I must say, it was nice not having to run ideas past anyone. Everything I picked out for this place was all me. I didn't have to take anyone else's opinion into consideration when picking out tile, flooring, or furniture. But then again, I have only myself to blame if I don't like something now!
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Testing a Book Idea on Social Media

Thursday, December 19, 2024


Not long ago, Deidre, a writing friend, posted a photo showing the wonky way she cut her daughter’s sandwich. In their household, a sandwich is never simply cut symmetrically in half. The cuts are always off-center or otherwise varied. She couldn’t believe the enthusiastic response to her photo and how everyone played with various names for the innovative cuts. The response was so strong that you can know buy Deidre J. Owen’s The Sandwich Cuts Book online. 

The week that she announced her plan to create the book, I was playing around with a graphic. I periodically add text to photos to make graphics for social media. If this is well received, I thought, I could make a book like Deidre’s. 

How was the response? Crickets, people. Nothing but crickets. 

My idea? I love languages, especially when phrases don’t translate exactly. What do I mean? In English, a book lover is a book worm. In Spanish, the person is a library rat. In Danish, the phrase is reading horse. A book swallower is the phrase in Welsh. No, I don’t think this is robust enough for a print book but perhaps an ebook of some kind. A freebie. At least that was my thought. Ah, well. 

But this illustrates why it can be a good idea to test things out online. Some people blog their book before actually creating the manuscript. Others, who are doing something more graphic, create posts for other forms of social media like Twitter, Instagram, Bluesky or Facebook.
 
Previewing your book can be a good idea. It saves you the time of creating a full manuscript if there is no interest. But this assumes something. Are the people you normally interact with the audience for your idea? If not, you can’t expect much of a reception.
 
This is also a good way to get feedback. Not sure if readers would be more interested in a chapter set in Miami or Milan? Just ask. Of course, there’s a downside to this. You are definitely going to use one of these two locations. You’ve decided that. But everyone wants you to use where they live, where they were born, or the location they just saw on the Travel Channel. 

There is also the matter of balance. Post something online and it is published. Are you going to be able to interest a publisher at this point? Maybe if your readership is large enough or if you can expand on what you’ve posted, making it bigger and better. 

Posting about things you really want to do can be discouraging. Why is everyone commenting on another cat clip and you can’t garner any interest? 

Maybe the best way is to do what Deidre did. Post about what is going on in your life and jump on what gets a strong response. 

Fortunately, I have enough ideas that I can’t pursue them all. Besides, I’m a devoted library rat/reading horse/book swallower and I have another book to read. 

--SueBE

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Sue Bradford Edwards' is the author of over 60 books for young readers.  

She is also the instructor for 3 WOW classes which begin on the first Monday of every month. She teaches:
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Interview with Emily Shipman: Summer '24 Flash Fiction Contest First Place Winner

Tuesday, December 17, 2024
Emily Shipman lives in Whitefish Bay, Wisconsin with her husband, two kids, and a dwindling colony of Sea Monkeys. She has worked in sugar beet fields, colleges, offices, stadiums, hospitals, and home. In her free time, she writes flash fiction, steals pebbles from Lake Michigan and invests too much love in a baseball team that cannot love her back.

--interview by Marcia Peterson

WOW: Congratulations on winning first place in our Summer 2024 Flash Fiction competition. What prompted you to enter the contest?

EmilyThank you! This is my first time winning a contest so there was a lot of dancing and cheering when I found out. I was in a writing program called Monthly Mentorship and my instructor, Katey Schultz, suggested WOW! Women On Writing when I was looking for places to submit flash fiction. I entered the summer contest because the top prize of Tom Bromley’s novel writing class was appealing, and I thought this story could be a good fit. I’m glad I took my shot!

WOW Can you tell us what encouraged the idea behind your story, “Sorry Do I Know You?”

EmilyIt started with a friendly discussion about how messy I leave our butter tub at home, something I never thought was strange because its butter, crumbs just find their way in there. And then I thought about what these small details might suggest to someone who doesn't know you. This story is completely fiction, but I remember dating in my twenties and some of the questionable behavior I ignored because I was trying to fit a rosy version of that person into my life. I liked giving my narrator the clarity to escape the fantasy she created.

WOW: Why do you write flash? What makes it different for you?

EmilyI started writing flash a few years ago when I wanted to find a way back to writing, and jumping into longer forms was paralyzing. I have two young kids and limited time, so flash felt like a way to create complete stories in short bursts. I didn't need to keep track of lots of places and characters because I only needed to focus on one moment. And it is possible to toggle between projects without spending a lot of time rereading before jumping back into the story.

WOW: What advice would you give to someone wanting to try writing flash fiction for the first time?

EmilyThe best way to start is by reading a variety of flash fiction. There are great online websites and journals, or if you want a physical book, I like the Rose Metal Press Field Guide to Writing Flash Fiction edited by Tara L. Masih because it offers examples and prompts to get you started. Flash fiction is fun and when you ask your non-writing friends to read it, it is a very small time commitment.

WOW: Thanks so much for chatting with us today, Emily. Before you go, do you have a favorite writing tip or piece of advice you can share?

EmilyThank you, Marcia. I am still new to the flash fiction form, but my best advice to anyone starting to write or starting to write again is to find a few other writers and set a monthly deadline to share something. For three years, I have been Zooming with two other writers and it keeps me on track when I really just want to spend my free time bingeing every ridiculous version of "Love Island" instead of writing.

Also, your verbs are going to do a lot of heavy lifting so choose exciting ones.

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Ask the Book Doctor: About Literary Agents

Monday, December 16, 2024
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by Bobbie Christmas

Q: Do I really need a literary agent if I want to sell my book to a publisher?

A: The answer depends on your manuscript. Some publishers—it seems mostly smaller publishers of nonfiction—accept submissions directly without the need of an agent. Most bigger publishers and publishers of fiction accept submissions only through agents. Their logic is that the agents do the hard upfront work of reading through hundreds of submissions and picking only the best to submit to the publisher. 

Research the publishers you’re interested in and see if they accept unagented submissions. If they don’t, then yes, you need to find an agent, and no one claims that the process of finding an agent is easy.

Q: What’s the best way to find a literary agent?

A: You’ll find listings for agents and their preferences on several websites, including Reedsy and others. Some websites claim to list agents but want you to pay for or subscribe to something or other to get their lists. Don’t fall for gimmicks when the same information is free elsewhere. 

Finding a list is just the beginning. You’ll next need to go to agents’ websites to see if they’re accepting submissions and what genres they prefer. Sending a mystery novel to an agent who represents only nonfiction would be a waste of time, for example. Once you have a list of a few agents who represent the type and genre of your manuscript, you must then read and follow the exact way each one wants to receive submissions. Most agents these days no longer accept submissions through the mail. Some accept email submissions; others accept submissions only through Submittable, a digital way for writers to connect with potential agents and publishers. Some agents have a form to fill out on their own websites.

The vital thing is to know exactly what agents want in a submission. Some want only a query letter. Some want a query letter and ten sample pages. Some want a query letter, a proposal, an outline, and thirty sample pages. Agents’ requirements differ, so you must be sure to follow the method each agent wants. 

The next step is patience. Most agents need a month or two to wade through the many submissions they receive every day. In addition most agents won’t get back to you unless they are interested, so all you get in return is silence. A few have automatic email responses that at least reassure you that they have received your submission.

Q: Is it okay to submit my manuscript to more than one agent at a time?

A: In the old days when agents received only printed submissions, it was standard to include the mention that it was a multiple submission. Some agents didn’t accept multiple submissions. Now that we’re in the digital age it’s become common to submit manuscripts to multiple agents, but with a few courtesies in mind.

If more than one agent requests the full manuscript, let both or all of them know that you may be considering multiple offers. You may even set a deadline for when you will make a decision. 

Some agents will ask for exclusivity when they request a full manuscript. Respect that agent’s request and don’t submit your manuscript elsewhere until the end of the exclusivity period. 

Q: How much do I have to pay a literary agent?

A: If an agent asks you to pay a fee before representing you, run! You’ve found a scammer. Legitimate literary agents don't charge upfront fees. They work on a commission basis, usually taking 15 percent of any royalties the publisher pays. They are able to get your manuscript in the hands of publishers you couldn’t have reached on your own, and they work hard to negotiate the best deal on your behalf. They definitely earn their fees. 

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Bobbie Christmas is a book editor, author of Write In Style: Use Your Computer to Improve Your Writing, and owner of Zebra Communications. She will answer your questions too. Send them to Bobbie@zebraeditor.com or BZebra@aol.com. Read Bobbie’s Zebra Communications blog at https://www.zebraeditor.com/blog/ or visit https://www.zebraeditor.com/.
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Interview with Sandra Jensen: Q4 2024 Creative Nonfiction Contest Runner Up

Sunday, December 15, 2024
Sandra’s Bio:
Sandra Jensen has over 60 short story, essay and flash publications including in: World Literature Today, The Irish Times, Descant and AGNI. Awards include winning the Bridport Prize for a first novel and the Grindstone Novel Prize, and multiple honorable mentions, short and long-listings for her short stories and flash pieces. She was also awarded Top 10 in WOW! Women on Writing’s Q3 CNF Essay Contest. She is currently working on a hybrid memoir in essays about art, illness, trauma and her relationship with her sculptor mother. Sandra leads writing workshops and mentors writers. She has been living with chronic illness for three decades and her book for writers with chronic disabling conditions, “The Irrepressible Writer: How Writers with Ill Health Write Well”, commissioned by Story Machine in the UK, will soon be published. She currently lives in Brighton, England. You can find her at www.sandrajensen.net

If you haven't done so already, check out Sandra's award-winning story "Eclipse" and then return here for a chat with the author. 

WOW: Congratulations on placing in the Q4 2024 Creative Nonfiction Contest! How did you begin writing your essay and how did it and your writing processes evolve as you wrote? 

Sandra: I started this piece many years ago, and most likely started it in the same way as most of my short pieces: using a method called Freefall and my own process which I call A Page a Day. I talked a bit about these in my previous interview. Essentially, I don’t plan anything, I just sit there and see what arises, and once I start writing, I let one word follow the other, without changing anything, just to see where it goes. It often goes nowhere useful, but I’ve had a lot of short pieces published using this method, and sometimes with very little editing needed. However. I was not getting any bites with publishing “Eclipse”, so every so often I’d take another look and do a bit of tweaking. One of the main issues for me with this piece was the ending, I couldn’t get it right. But after being awarded Runner Up in a recent WOW Creative Nonfiction Essay contest, I took another look and worked hard on the ending until I was happy with it. A couple of people have said it makes them laugh, which I like, given it’s quite a dark piece! 

WOW: Thanks so much for sharing more about your writing process using Freefall and A Page a Day. Sounds like it has helped you to be a productive writer. What did you learn about yourself or your writing by creating this essay? 

Sandra: I can’t say anything specific really about this essay, but what I have been coming to terms with recently is that perhaps I’m a better nonfiction writer than a fiction writer! Most of my fiction is largely based on my own experience, but perhaps it’s time to focus on nonfiction. 

WOW: Fun! Enjoy exploring the nonfiction genre! From your bio, it sounds like chronic illness has influenced you as a writer. Will you tell us more about your experience with the intersection of writing and illness? 

Sandra: Another difficult question to answer, for me at least. While I fully agree with what Virginia Woolf said in her essay “On Being Ill”—that a person relates to, perceives, the world differently when sick, I have for most of my three decades of being ill tried to pretend I wasn’t, and considered myself ‘normal’. In the early years, this was possible as my illness was not as severe as it is now. As it became more severe, when I finally committed to being ‘a writer’ in my mid-forties, it was a great relief to focus on something other than my health and the various symptoms that plagued me. In fact, initially my health improved. I didn’t write about my illness, and I’ve only recently started doing so. I don’t – or haven’t – found it cathartic, but perhaps I haven’t yet found the right entry point. 

Much of my early work is very body-based, however. “Give all the sensuous detail” is one of the Freefall precepts, and for me this was easy as I was and am so physically sensitive: in touch with – too much so! – physical sensations, with smells, noises, textures and so on. I’ve backed off a little on this approach, but I do feel it’s given me an advantage in terms of expressing how certain characters feel and experience the world. Also, as my own world is quite limited compared to many, and these days I walk and move slowly, I notice small things that might pass others by. The shape of tiny leaves, the brush of air against my cheek. 

There’s a quote by Amy Morgan that I like “…it seems likely that living with illness may deepen writers’ capacity to imagine extreme situations.” I think this is correct, although in my case I have CPTSD which means I’ve lived through a number of extreme situations anyway! 

I should say I am grateful that it was never my dream to become a firefighter or something else that requires a strong, resilient body, although in 2021 I developed severe sciatica, and this put a massive dent in my ability to write. Sitting or even lying down made the pain worse, and I can’t stand for any great length of time. It was devastating for me. Thankfully the pain is now well managed. And my illness is still tremendously limiting. I only have about 3 or 4 usable hours in a day to do something that isn’t resting or taking care of myself (or my rescue cat!), and this of course affects how much I’m able to focus on my writing. 

WOW: Thank you for sharing your story about illness and its connection to your writing. I find it so helpful and inspiring to hear what other writers are overcoming to be productive and successful writers, and I very much appreciate hearing about your experiences. Which creative nonfiction essays or writers have inspired you most, and in what ways did they inspire you? 

Sandra: While I’d read and loved Jo Ann Beard’s The Boys of My Youth, it wasn’t until I read Alexander Chee’s How to Write an Autobiographical Novel that I realised what an art the personal essay was. And what an exciting art! That book made me want to learn how to do it. I don’t think I have, not yet at least. Not longer essays. But I’m working on it. For me, many of the best essays – personal essays – can be both personal and universal, perhaps weaving two or more threads together to create something that is so much more than a particular event or situation in someone’s life. 

WOW: Those are excellent examples that show what creative nonfiction can accomplish. If you could tell your younger self anything about writing, what would it be? 

Sandra: Don’t procrastinate and do everything else under the sun other than writing! 

WOW: I think many of us can relate to that! Anything else you’d like to add? 

Sandra: I always appreciate if there’s a touch of humour when I read essays about dark or difficult subjects. I suppose it’s something I’m trying to learn, not just in writing, but about life. How to hold onto that touch of lightness in the face of suffering or adversity. 

WOW: Thank you for sharing your writing with us and for your thoughtful responses. Happy writing! 


Interviewed by Anne Greenawalt, founder and editor-in-chief of Sport Stories Press, which publishes sports books by, for, and about sportswomen and amateur athletes. Engage on Twitter or Instagram @GreenMachine459.
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Back to School

Wednesday, December 11, 2024

 

I'm exhausted. I've been debating for several weeks - with myself. I want to go to a writing conference in March. My writing self is shouting, "Yes! Let's go." My practical self is whining (yes, my practical self whines a lot), "But the cost...what about your 9 to 5 job...it's multiple days so you need a hotel room...will it be worth it." My practical self, after years in marketing, is always worrying about ROI.

My family has been on this rollercoaster with me. Despite not being writers, they have listened to my dissection of the workshops, cost, advantages and my decisions to not go...go...no, not go...maybe. They are all encouraging me to go. I suspect so they won't get drawn into any more writing conference discussions.

Last night - the last day of early registration - I did it. There's no turning back now. They have my credit card number. 

Over the course of this seemingly endless debate, I've changed my outlook on writing conferences, classes, etc. My friends and family are involved in careers that cover a wide variety of industries. Yet they all have one thing in common. They all participate in career building events ranging from industry conferences to skills classes to online workshops. So why am I so reluctant?

The main reason may be that I'm the one footing the bill for any career building events I attend. But in reality there are plenty of affordable and even free options out there. I've taken several classes through WOW that made me notice new writing opportunities in my life. There are also classes popping up in my feed and inbox constantly. I also think part of it may be "imposter syndrome". Somewhere deep inside of me I feel I'm not worth the investment.

For 2025 I've decided that one of my goals will be to actively pursue career building opportunities. I'm going to give myself a money and time budget for the year and find a few ways to hone my skills. In the past, I've found that participating in classes and attending talks not only educates me but also gives me a surge of enthusiasm for my writing career. I never thought that these events weren't valuable experiences. They just always seemed to move to the bottom of my to-do list. But for the upcoming year, I'm giving myself permission to pursue these opportunities.

I'll be happy to share how my experiment has gone at the end of 2025.

What about you? Do you invest in yourself? Do you worry about time and money spent?


Jodi M. Webb writes from her home in the Pennsylvania mountains about everything from DIY projects to tea to butterflies.  She's also a blog tour manager for WOW-Women on Writing and a writing tutor at her local university. Get to know her @jodiwebbwritesFacebook and blogging at Words by Webb

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Interview with Elizabeth Jannuzzi: Q4 2024 Creative Nonfiction Contest Runner Up

Sunday, December 08, 2024
Elizabeth Jannuzzi is a writer whose work explores themes of loss, motherhood, and recovery from alcoholism. Her essays have been featured in The Rumpus, Memoir Monday, The Brevity Blog, and more. Elizabeth received an honorable mention in Memoir Magazine’s 2018 Recovery Contest, was shortlisted for Cagibi’s 2019 Macaron Prize, and earned a Best of the Net nomination in 2023. Elizabeth serves as the operations and communications manager at Project Write Now, a nonprofit writing organization. She engages with her audience through a weekly Substack and is working on a memoir.

---interview by Marcia Peterson

WOW: Congratulations on placing as a runner up in our Q4 2024 Creative Nonfiction essay competition! What prompted you to enter the contest?

Elizabeth: Thank you so much! I was honored and delighted to be a runner-up in WOW’s contest. I became aware of WOW! Women On Writing when a colleague, Courtney Harler, from the organization where I work Project Write Now, won the Flash Essay contest in October 2022. Since then, I’ve been a fan of this publication that promotes women. THEN, my colleague and friend, Jennifer Gaites, won first place in WOW’s Q4 2023 Creative Nonfiction essay contest. I guess I wanted to throw my hat in the ring as well.

WOW:  Your entry, “Purgatory in Two Parts” is a quietly powerful piece, including the ending. What inspired you to write it?

Elizabeth: You know how as writers, we keep returning to the same themes, or as a memoirist, the same moment in our lives? My sister’s suicide attempt and the eight months she spent in the hospital before she eventually died is one of those moments for me. (I have other published pieces on the same topic.)

I’d like to say my inspiration is to remove the shame surrounding mental illness and suicide but to be honest, that’s just a by-product of my writing. I feel drawn to write about my sister’s suicide in order to understand it. Twenty-seven years after she passed, I’m still trying to figure it out. The second part of my essay though is a direct reaction to people (the lit mag editor) not understanding mental illness and suicide and how that hurts those of us who are survivors of suicide loss. That section IS an attempt to educate people.

WOW:  Do you have any thoughts or advice for writing about difficult things?

Elizabeth:  Ah, that’s a good question. But beyond the typical self-care advice--be kind to yourself, take breaks, go for a walk, etc.--not really. I will say that it’s important to lean into the difficult topics. Write the thing that’s hard to say. That’s where the heat is. That’s what’s going to resonate with readers. It may be difficult, but that’s what connects us and creates empathy. “Normalize,” as Brené Brown would say.

WOW:  You mentioned that you’re working on a memoir. Anything you can share about the writing process, or how the journey of writing this book is going for you?

Elizabeth: Thanks for asking! I’ve written one memoir, SOBER MOM, about my recovery from alcoholism. I’m currently querying agents for that manuscript. (Hello? Any agents out there?) And I’m writing a weekly Substack to build my author platform.

My second memoir about loss, grief, and resilience, called THIS WOMAN’S WORK, is still a draft. I plan to revise it in 2025.

I’m currently a member of a wonderful community of writers called book inc, a division of the nonprofit Project Write Now. Our Memoir and Novel Incubators are yearlong creative writing programs to guide and support writers from their initial story ideas to the completion of their manuscripts. I highly recommend this program, and I’m not just saying that as its program manager! :-)

WOW:  Thanks so much for chatting with us today, Elizabeth. Before you go, can you share a favorite writing tip or piece of advice?

Elizabeth: Thank YOU for the opportunity. Writing advice? Let’s see…I used to berate myself because I didn’t write every day. I thought I wasn’t a real writer because of that fact. As a busy working mom, I only had time to write on the weekends or if I scheduled a writing retreat for myself. Once I let go of that (patriarchial?) pressure to write every day and allowed myself to write when and how I could, I started to flourish. Don’t let others tell you what your writing practice should look like.


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Caring for Yourself During Writer's Burnout

Tuesday, December 03, 2024


It seems only appropriate that as I sit here writing this, a carbon monoxide detector in my house is dying and sending out a warning beep every 90 seconds. How about we add stress to a writer who is already at her limit? (Don’t worry, all is fine, another detector died a few weeks ago and we had to replace it. Currently waiting on my husband to get home with a new one). 


The past month has brought ups and downs, and I’m sure my fellow writers can relate. After sending out the first batch of agent queries on my latest novel, I was elated when three agents requested the full manuscript. I started envisioning what I would do with a book deal and began outlining a new book so I would have something else to sell if an agent decided to represent me. But to quote the great Carrie Bradshaw from “Sex and the City,” and just like that . . . two agents passed on the book, albeit kindly. The positive takeaway from these rejections is that I realized I may be pitching the book incorrectly. While I’ve been envisioning it as a suspense/thriller, it may not be fast-paced enough for these agents requesting a suspense/thriller. The book also features a lot of family secrets, an exploration of relationships between mothers and daughters and sisters, and maybe my comp list should be more in alignment with that. 

I had a short story published at The Write Launch with kind feedback, and had another market I pitched the same story to reject it and tell me it was “unrealistic.” They also said I checked the box stating I was 18 or under and a quick Google search showed them I was absolutely older than that. I don’t remember checking a box telling my age, but I guess I did, and the e-mail made me feel pretty foolish nonetheless since they cater to young adult writers. 

After working on a true crime podcast for the past four years, I’ve gotten burned out being the sole host/creator and have been wondering if I should stop the venture altogether and focus solely on fiction. I’m also tired of competing with other true crime podcasters who jump on any national story that they think will draw listeners. Since my podcast is regional, and I haven’t jumped on the popular podcaster bandwagon of recording all my episodes in video format, I wonder if it’s even possible to achieve the kind of numbers I’d need to attract paying advertisers. I’ve decided to give myself a break from the podcast over the holidays to reassess the situation and give myself time to plan new content. 

I've been here before. A few years ago I experienced severe burnout when working as the editor of a regional lifestyle magazine. It was a contract position that had me working many nights, weekends, and holidays and I felt like I was on a hamster wheel I couldn't escape. I left the job to pursue my own creative endeavors and felt immediate relief. Unfortunately, I've created yet another hamster wheel for myself with my own projects. I think it’s normal for us to have highs and lows in this industry. I keep trying, just like I know everyone else here is trying. I’ve told myself I’m going to give myself a break over the next month and focus on taking care of my mental and physical health. This includes reading more books for enjoyment, exercising, walking my dogs, eating healthy, delicious food, and making sure I don’t isolate myself at home. I’ve been doing that too much with my self-imposed deadlines, and I really need to make sure I make lunch and coffee plans with friends, stroll through some of my favorite stores in town just because I feel like it, and more. 

What do you do to regroup when you’ve found yourself in a writing slump? 

Renee Roberson is an award-winning writer and the host/creator of of the true crime podcast, Missing in the Carolinas.




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Interview with Kerby Kunstler Caudill, Runner Up in the WOW! Q4 2024 Creative Nonfiction Essay Contest

Friday, November 29, 2024

 

Congratulations to Kerby Kunstler Caudill from Culver City, California for her award-winning story, "Counting," and to all of the other contestants and winners of the WOW! Women on Writing Quarter 4 2024 Essay Contest!

Today, I'm excited to interview Kerby about her award-winning essay.


Interview by Crystal J. Casavant-Otto

WOW: Welcome, Kerby! Thank you for being here with me today - I'm sure our WOW! readers are excited as I am to learn more about Kerby and Counting! Readers - if you haven't already, pop over and read Counting and then return here for this fun interview! Don't rush - we will wait! And of course - here's a little more about Kerby:


Kerby's Bio:

Although born in Ashland, Oregon with family roots in New York, Kerby Kunstler Caudill has spent most of her life in Southern California. She earned a BA in Film Studies from the University of California at Irvine and an MA in education from Cal State Long Beach. After 20 years in education, she put pen to paper for more than just grading tests. For several years she workshopped her memoir Oma & Me and YA Novels Elle and You First, with author Francesca Lia Block and is currently in a workshop with author/composer Dale Trumbore. 

Her work has been published in The Good Life Review, Months to Years, Lit Angels, MUTHA Magazine, and Dorothy Parker’s Ashes. As an empty nester, she currently works at an afterschool enrichment program called Lighthouse in South Central Los Angeles, copy edits the online magazine Lit Angels and the book Time by Design by Dr. Dawna Ballard, and reads for Hippocampus Magazine. When not petting her dogs, or futzing with her plants, she is chipping away at her third novel, Facing Reality. 

 Visit her website at www.kerbycaudill.com and connect with her on Instagram @kerbnerd.

Now that everyone has had a chance to read your fabulous submission - let's get down to it, shall we?

Thank you Kerby for submitting - can you tell us what your intended take-away was when you sent this portion of your memoir out into the world? What did you want readers to get from this?


Kerby: Thank you for publishing Counting! The take-away of this abridged chapter (and my entire memoir) is to have compassion and acceptance for those who may not be where you are: whether it be their physical or cognitive ability, mental health, or level of self awareness. People overlooked my sister, or worse, outright bullied her, yet she was the compass that guided my life. I grew up resenting my role as a third parent. I didn't consider what my parents were going through - caring for our family while under emotional and financial duress. Looking back, we were all trying our best to hold on; to sanity, to love, and to each other. We all need more of that.

WOW: Boy does that speak to me and my mama heart right now - thank you for your honesty! As a mom, I'm so busy caring for everyone that I don't always think about how my older children are feeling. I hope they know they have my support, but the support of others is important too. Where do you go for support? Who helps you and how when you feel like you need a shoulder?

Kerby:  To be honest, as the perpetual caretaker I rarely accept care from others, but my husband Jeff and daughter Melody support me, gas me up and are rooting for me and my writing career. When I had to quit teaching due to medical concerns, my husband didn’t bat an eyelash and just wanted what was best for me. I am lucky to have an assemblage of friends who are surrogate siblings, many you will see in my memoir! Women in my writer’s groups have also been invaluable, especially Dale Trumbore.

WOW: I can definitely feel the caretaker in your writing - speaking of nurturing and caretaking; what would your current self like to say to a younger a version of yourself? 

Kerby: Oh, my sweet, dear younger self, you lonely child. Heed your teachers’ advice and take your writing seriously—SOONER. Get an MFA in writing instead of an MA in education. Have confidence in yourself and your good heart and know that you deserve love, regardless of achievements, accolades, or acts of service.

WOW: Sounds like great advice for young Kerby and all the young writers out there! You have an impressive bio - sounds like you are busy writing - what is your latest/current project?

Kerby: Thank you! I am currently trying to whip up inspiration to finish my fourth book Facing Reality which is a fun romance novel about Naomi, whose daughter convinces her to go on a vacation years after her husband died of Covid. When Naomi gets off the plane, she realizes she was set up to be on a reality dating show. Of course, she falls in love with one of the producers who then ruins her reputation in the edit—but true love prevails against all odds. 

WOW: That sounds like a fun read and who doesn't want a break from reality for a nice vacation? One last question before we part ways (for now, not forever as I like to say): what advice do you have for other caretakers and/or writers when it comes to stress, turbulent times, etc... you mentioned covid which let's talk about stress right? Give us your tips!

Kerby: Since October 7, 2023, life has changed for me and many of my fellow Jews on a molecular level. The upcoming election doesn’t help my emotional state as our democracy and women’s rights hang in the balance. I’d love to say I exercise, eat healthy, meditate and find peace within. What I actually do is: my own version of prayer, take breaks from reading the news, visit friends, spend time with family, eat chocolate covered raisons or Oreos by the handful, cuddle with my dogs, play all the NYT word games and a hell of a lot of Candy Crush. 

Thank you so much for this interview! Again, I am honored to be a part of this publication and group of women writers.

WOW: Thank YOU Kerby - I certainly enjoyed our chat and hope to help you once your novel is complete - I have a feeling we will be working together again soon!

Hugs! 

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Interviewed by Crystal J. Casavant-Otto who just keeps on keeping on and can be found blogging and sharing on social media hashtag #raisingkidsandcattle #shelovesgodandsheridesgoodhorses #thankfulgratefulblessed 

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Interview with Anna Corbin: Q4 2024 Creative Nonfiction Contest Runner Up

Sunday, November 24, 2024

I found Anna Corbin to be a real inspiration. The WOW! Women on Writing Q4 2024 Creative Nonfiction Essay Contest is the first and only writing contest she has ever entered. She learned that she made the Top Ten the day before her forty-sixth birthday, confirming her belief that it is never too late to chase your dreams.


Prior to the COVID-19 pandemic, Anna spent her time advocating for health care on a local and national level. She received multiple awards and recognitions as a result of her efforts. Taking an indefinite break from the rigors of activism, Anna now spends her time pursuing her goal of becoming a published author. She is an avid reader and aspiring writer with multiple projects in various stages of development.


Anna lives in south central Pennsylvania with her husband, their two teen sons, a dog named Eloise, and an axolotl named Alfie. Check her out on Facebook.


You can read her essay "Dirty Laundry" HERE.


WOW: Congratulations on being a runner up in the WOW Q4 2024 Creative Nonfiction Essay Contest which also happens to be the first writing contest you ever entered! What made you decide that "Dirty Laundry" was the piece to enter?


Anna: Thank you so much! Winning runner-up in the WOW Q4 2024 Creative Nonfiction Essay Contest came as such a shock to me. I have written many pieces over the years as a hobby, but only recently decided to actually devote the time to becoming a professional writer. I woke up one morning to an email from Poets & Writers advertising the WOW contest and decided that morning that I would enter. It was only a few weeks before the deadline, so I chose “Dirty Laundry” simply because it was the most recent essay I had written. I was already proud of it on a personal level. It is difficult for me to talk about some parts of my past publicly, and I had written “Dirty Laundry” to help me cope with the feelings I was having over parting with the basket. 

I know that if I am going to make it as a writer, I cannot not be afraid of sharing my truth. I ultimately want to write relatable content that might help others heal from their own trauma, but my desire to maintain my privacy has always held me back. Entering this contest was about more than just being judged by strangers for the first time or seeing if I have what it takes to win writing contests. It was about having the strength to share something deeply personal with the general public. It was about exposing my vulnerability. As far I was concerned, the true contest was whether or not I was brave enough to go public, so my goal was met the moment I hit, “Send.” Making it into the top ten after having no expectations at all was an incredible feeling. I am honestly still processing it!

 

WOW: You are relatively new to the life of a working writer. Can you share what made you pivot from health activist to writer?

 

Anna: For the past twenty years, I have gone where I am needed. I am a cosmetologist by trade, but when I gave birth to my oldest son, I was needed at home, so I became a stay-at-home mom. Shortly after giving birth to my second son, the three of us were diagnosed with Noonan Syndrome, a genetic condition that affects various systems of the body. I immediately became an advocate for my boys, for the whirlwind of doctors’ visits, hospitalizations, and surgeries that followed. When they began to miss too much school from all of their illnesses, I became a homeschool teacher. Seven years ago, when there was a chance that they may lose their health care due to bills that were floating through Congress, I became a health care activist. I was in DC every week, walking the halls of the House and Senate buildings, meeting with political leaders, and fighting for the rights of not only my sons, but for myself and millions of others with chronic illnesses and disabilities. We ultimately won that battle, and it was such a relief. Now that my sons are older, they are thriving in terms of their health, and as teens, they do not need me as much. 

The writer in me has always been waiting for her turn. There has not been much room for her in the very busy life I have led over the last few decades, and she has been relegated to late nights or early mornings and any spare moments I could muster. There are so many formidable health care activists who are willing to pick up the baton, so I feel comfortable putting that part of my life aside. It is my time. I am ready to make the commitment to become a published author.  

 

WOW: An amazing story and you must have so much to say. What is one of the most surprising things you've learned about the writing world?

 

Anna: I am still very much a newbie, so I have not had much experience yet, but one thing that I have found to be refreshing is how supportive the writing community is. Whenever I feel stuck or like I might want to give up, I reach out to my writer friends or visit a social media page for writers. I have found that writers are an amazing group of people who are ready and willing to lift each other up and give encouragement. It is a beautiful thing, and I feel honored to be a part of such a remarkable vocation.

 

WOW: Yes, I appreciate that feeling of having so many people rooting for me too. Can you share a little more about the type of writing you're pursuing?

 

Anna: I have always been an essayist. It is my favorite form of writing. I love telling personal stories in unconventional ways, and taking the simplest detail (like, say, a laundry basket) and building a message around it. With my many lived experiences, my memoir is my constant work in progress. 

I am also trying my hand at fiction. I have never written fiction before, but a few years ago, I had an idea and decided to run with it. I did not to expect to have this much fun writing fiction, and it has been so enjoyable that I am now simultaneously writing two very different novels.

 

WOW: You are a very busy writer! This may have nothing to do with your

writing but I think WOW readers would like to know - what's an axolotl (see Anna's bio above) and how exactly did one come to share your life?

 

Anna: An axolotl is a type of salamander that is native to Mexico. A friend of mine is a biology teacher who had acquired three of them to observe for his Masters’ thesis. He posted about them on Facebook when they were just babies. My oldest son loves exotic animals, so we asked if we could come see them in person. My friend countered by asking us if we would rather have one to keep. My son jumped at the chance. Alfie was a little over a year old when he came to live with us, and he just turned five. He has such a big personality, and we all love him so much. I never thought I would ever have a footlong salamander living in an aquarium in my basement, but now I cannot imagine life without him!


WOW: I would love to see Alfie make a cameo appearance in one of your novels! Thanks for sharing and we all look forward to your future achievements.


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Ask the Book Doctor: Advice for Writers Who Couldn't Sell Their First Book

Saturday, November 23, 2024
 

by Bobbie Christmas
 
Q: I have several acquaintances who have given up writing because they could not sell their first book or two. One is a woman who wrote two excellent stories, so it is really a shame. I do not know what to tell them. Any advice?
 
A: If only we could sell the first book we write! Talk to many published authors, and most will tell you their first book turned out to be practice, but a future book finally got accepted. Some authors were able to sell their first or second book, but often only after selling their third, fourth, or fifth book and then going back to sell the first, once the authors had a following.
 
If writers wrote only for the purpose of selling books, few books would be written, because a dismal percentage of books get sold to publishers, and self-published books rarely sell more than a few hundred copies.
 
What advice would I have for writers who stop writing because they didn’t sell their first or second story? None. Anyone who quits writing because of a little rejection is not a writer at heart. True writers write because they have a passion. They have stories, information, or opinions they feel compelled to put on paper. That’s what passion is about.
 
Look at Olympic athletes. They had a passion for their sport. They didn’t one day decide to high jump, practice for a few weeks, and then expect to be accepted into the Olympics. No, they spent years learning, practicing, competing, and honing their skills. Writers—serious ones—do the same. We write for years. We learn, practice, and produce multiple stories, articles, essays, or books. We may submit them and get rejections, yet we still write more. Writing isn’t an easy craft to conquer. It takes time, patience, knowledge, and dedication.
 
Like sports, success with writing takes a great deal of practice before reaching a level of proficiency. A strong story is a great start; following the tenets of good creative writing helps. Sometimes getting to know the right people helps too. Many writers have found success by attending conferences where they pitched their books to agents or publishers seeking new clients. Even combining our writing skills with perseverance and good marketing doesn’t guarantee success in sales. Luck also plays a part. In the interim writers must learn to brush off rejection and keep going.
 
Most writers have faced rejection. Those who were successful didn’t give up. I’ve been successful in selling enough of my writing to feel satisfied, but trust me, my works have been rejected more often than accepted. I recently recycled all the rejection letters I kept in a thick notebook. In this era when writers submit works through email and Submittable, most publishers and agents simply don’t respond at all, if they don’t accept a submission. Maybe no response is better than a rejection letter. At least we don’t end up with copious rejection letters to recycle.
 
Success? Maybe writers need to redefine the word. Simply having completed a writing project should be considered a success, because success can otherwise be temporary. I was successful in selling the first edition of Write In Style to a publisher. Ten years later I created an expanded and updated second edition, but by then my publisher had closed the imprint that bought the first edition. With much help from BookLogix, I self-published the second edition. Sales have been moderately successful, but nothing like the sales of the first edition, when my publisher distributed my book to bookstores and libraries across the country, a feat nearly impossible with self-published books.
 
I’ve written three more books that have received rejections, but I keep submitting them to agents and publishers, and I keep writing. I feel joy while writing. I lose all sense of time. The mere act of writing is my true success. I will keep writing as long as I am able, because I am a writer.
 
Writers write, which is the reason I can’t give advice to those who stop writing when they don’t meet with immediate success in selling their work.
 
I hope your friends don’t stop writing, though. Quitting is a foolproof way to fail.
 
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Bobbie Christmas is a book editor, author of Write In Style: Use Your Computer to Improve Your Writing, and owner of Zebra Communications. She will answer your questions too. Send them to Bobbie@zebraeditor.com or BZebra@aol.com. Read Bobbie’s Zebra Communications blog at https://www.zebraeditor.com/blog/.
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Pralines and Creamed - Interview with Elizabeth Maria Naranjo (and Join our Reader Review Event)

Friday, November 22, 2024



Today, I'm thrilled to interview Elizabeth Maria Naranjo about her vibrant and beautifully haunting new book, Pralines and Creamed. This is a lovely new book in her Sweet Dreams Mystery Series and is book 2 of the series. This book is just as delightful as a standalone (although readers are already begging for a book 3). 

We're also inviting readers to participate in our Reader Review event. You can sign up by emailing: crystal@wow-womenonwriting.com and she will get you a copy of the book! 
You don't need to be a blogger to join in on this event; anyone who can leave a review on Goodreads and Amazon can participate and receive a copy of Pralines and Creamed. By leaving a review, you'll also be entered in a drawing to win a $25 Amazon Gift Card!

About the book:
It’s the spooky season in Pinewood, Arizona, and when Genevieve Winterland isn’t creating killer new recipes for Sweet Dreams Ice Cream Parlour, she’s helping BFF Brandon Summers prep for the most lit party of the year. Brandon’s parents own Hidden Treasures Bookstore, where famed horror writer Jack Kelley is launching his latest novel on Halloween night. 

Brandon’s dad isn’t thrilled that the arrogant Kelley, who was once sweet on Mrs. Summers, has chosen their store for his big event. Still, there’s no denying the author draws a huge crowd… which makes it hard to narrow down a suspect list when Kelley drops dead onstage—the victim of a shocking murder straight out of his own book. 

Fresh off Pinewood’s last cold case, Genevieve is happy to let the police handle this one. But when frosty Detective Christie zeroes in on Brandon’s dad as her prime suspect, Genevieve decides to take matters into her own hands. Can she get the scoop and solve the mystery haunting her hometown?
 
ASIN: B0D97GM9CJ
ISBN: B0DHHB3HWT
Publication date: October 1, 2024
Print Length: 234 pages
Genre: Young Adult Cozy Mystery
 
Pralines and Creamed; A Sweet Dreams Mystery (Sweet Dreams Mysteries Book 2) is available in print and as an ebook at Amazon. Add it to your Goodreads list.

About the author, Elizabeth Maria Naranjo:

Elizabeth Maria Naranjo

Elizabeth Maria Naranjo is the author of The Fourth Wall, The House on Linden Way, and What Was Never There. Her stories and essays have been widely published and nominated for the Pushcart Prize, Best American Essays, and Best of the Net, and her short story, “Windows,” was selected for Best Microfiction 2023. She lives in Tempe, Arizona, with her husband and two children.

Visit her website at www.elizabethmarianaranjo.com.
Twitter/X: @emarianaranjo

----- Interview by Crystal J. Casavant-Otto

WOW: I'm absolutely giddy to have you back - seriously! Your first three books were standalones; what was different about writing your first sequel, Pralines and Creamed

Elizabeth:
Great question! Honestly, writing a book is never easy, but you’d think writing books in a series would be easier. I’d already done the hard work of creating the settings and the characters from scratch when I wrote my debut YA cozy mystery, Murder by Milkshake. Now I figured I could just whip up a new murder plot and everything would fall into place around it. 

But what I found when writing Pralines and Creamed was that having an existing foundation made things harder. The issue for me was writing recaps, a skill I’d never had to hone and certainly failed to appreciate in series that I read. It’s much more difficult than it looks! 

For example, in the first few chapters of each Sweet Dreams book I need to describe my main character, Genevieve, her best friend, Brandon, the history of their friendship, the history of their families’ downtown shops, the description of those shops, and so on, as well as giving context to any plot point that’s referenced from the book before. That’s a lot of information! And while it’s fun to write the first time, it becomes cumbersome finding new ways of saying the same thing. Knowing that going into the third book did make it a little bit easier though. I was much better prepared for the challenge! 

WOW: I know I've asked this before and you've already given us some - but do you have anymore tips for writing cozy mysteries?  

Elizabeth: I researched for months before writing my first cozy; it was important to me to honor the cozy community and do justice to the specific genre norms. Two cozy mystery writers were instrumental in helping me learn to craft these cute and quirky books. The first is Elizabeth Spann Craig, who writes the Village Library Mystery series and runs a fantastic blog. From her series of posts on Writing the Cozy Mystery, I learned to write the back cover copy before the book and draft the murderer’s confession, even if it’s never used, to consolidate the clues and help me keep track of them.

Another great tip I learned from Craig is to have each suspect tell one lie and one truth when being interviewed by the amateur sleuth. This is brilliant, because it makes each innocent suspect as suspicious as the guilty one since they’re all hiding something, even if the secret is innocuous. 

The other cozy mystery writer to which I owe a debt of gratitude is Nancy J. Cohen. Cohen writes the Bad Hair Day Mystery series, which you should definitely check out, but she also wrote this how-to book on writing cozies, which includes chapters on world building, heightening suspense, and dealing with that muddy middle. The book is short, succinct, and essential reading for any wannabe cozy mystery writers out there! 

WOW: Speaking of genre norms, one of the cozy mystery rules you’ve mentioned before is needing a theme that centers around the protagonist’s job or hobby. For the Sweet Dreams series, what made you choose ice cream? 

Elizabeth: This is a fun detail! When I first started scribbling down ideas for a YA cozy mystery series, I knew my teenage heroine would be spirited, cheerful, and energetic. I’m naturally drawn to cozy mysteries that take place in bookstores and cafes, but this didn’t fit my main character’s personality. I thought about a 50s diner, or maybe a quirky antique store. But then my daughter, who was 16 at the time, landed her first job, at Baskin Robbins. She always came home smelling like ice cream and waffle cones, and she just looked adorable in her pink uniform hat. So I decided my MC would work in an ice cream shop, and I named it Sweet Dreams. 

WOW: For your last interview we covered your favorite Sweet Dreams character. And now for the more important question… What's your favorite Sweet Dreams dessert? 

Elizabeth: Oh, that’s a tough one. Let’s see… one of Genevieve’s first original creations is the Buttercream Dream layered sundae, and that would probably be my first choice. It’s two scoops of yellow cake batter ice cream with a layer of buttercream frosting between, topped with a generous helping of hot fudge, a swirl of whipped cream sprinkled with chocolate shavings, and a cherry on top of an edible candle. Sounds dreamy, right? Then again, you can never go wrong with a butterscotch malt! 
 
WOW: Oh Elizabeth, we could chat all day but I've got to go get some dessert! It's no wonder why I love your writing; I feel like if you lived next door, we'd be besties! I'm happy to let readers know that you'll be back with yet another tour very soon for book three, _______________________, which means another longer interview! When can we expect book 3?

Elizabeth: I'm so glad you asked! Book three in the Sweet Dreams series will be out by next Christmas, and WOW! readers can expect a giveaway to go with it!

Pralines and Creamed by Elizabeth Maria Naranjo

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Readers, if you'd like to receive a copy of Pralines and Creamed by Elizabeth Maria Naranjo for review, please email: crystal@wow-womenonwriting.com. Book reviews need to be posted by December 12, 2024 on Goodreads and Amazon. We'll be sharing all the reviews in a Reader Review Event and Giveaway post here on The Muffin on December 20! Besides receiving the book, you'll also be entered to win a $25 Amazon Gift Card!

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So, You Want to Write for Kids?

Thursday, November 21, 2024

 


Recently the organist at our church called to me across the chancel. “So, you’re a writer?” 


 “Yes?” 


“I didn’t know that!” 


I don’t hide what I do, and we’ve known each other for about 18 months. But somehow some people just seem to miss this fact about me. Yes, I am a writer. Yes, I write for young readers. 


Periodically when I’ve had an especially gruesome week, I consider giving it up. But then what would I do? If we’re just talking how would I fill my time, that isn’t an issue. I love taking classes and figuring out new things. I’m currently taking a class about AI. 


But if we are discussing how would I earn income? Hmm. That’s tricky. I’ve been a freelancer since about 1997. I’m not sure I’m good for much else at this point. 


Fortunately, tantrums and bad days aside, I’m good at what I do. I write primarily nonfiction for young readers. If writing for young readers is something you’d be interested in doing, the best thing you can do to pave your way is read books for young readers. 


If you want to write picture books, read picture books. If you are interested in nonfiction, read nonfiction. Young adult novels? There are so many great books for you to read. 


You don’t have to read only what you want to write. That means that you don’t have to confine yourself to only picture books or only middle grade. Who am I to deny you amazing books for other age groups? 


But do read things that were published in the last three years or so. Publishing is always changing and that includes the books that publishers want. Sure, some classics stand the test of time (Where the Wild Things Are) but today’s young readers want to read today’s books. One way to find these books is to check the new acquisitions at the library.


Another way to find these books is to sign up for publishing and literature newsletters. I get newsletters from Book Riot, Publisher’s Weekly, MacMillan, and Penguin Random House


When I tell you to read and read a lot, I don’t mean that you have to read print books. Audiobooks are a great way to get a feel for the play and flow in language. And ebooks are so convenient and also the way that many teens read. But really?  Print books are the only way to go if you want to write picture books. 


That’s because the format, complete with trim size and page turns, is a big part of the picture book experience. If you want to write picture books, you need to gain a feel for the full effect, page turns and everything. 


I’ve seen some people recommend that you read 1000 books before you start writing. Meh. I don’t know. The more you read the better. Reading will help you get a feel for what publishers want and what has already been published. It will help you learn about language and pacing and characterization. You’ll learn how to hook a reader and what setting details to include. 


Read, read, and read some more. But don’t use it as an excuse not to write. Because that part is truly vital if what you want to do is write for kids. 


--SueBE


Sue Bradford Edwards' is the author of over 60 books for young readers.  
  • To find out more about her writing, visit her site and blog, One Writer's Journey.  
  • Click here to find her newsletter.

She is also the instructor for 3 WOW classes which begin again on December 2, 2024. She teaches:
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